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David R. M.  

  • Status: Member
  • General Poet
  • Male/United States
  • Deviant since Oct 2, 2003, 5:03 PM
  • 5 Deviations
  • 26 Deviation Comments
  • 4 Deviant Comments
  • 22 Forum Posts
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First Collections

An Ocean   
A ripple, peak of wave  as it arises and descends  like lives of broken  men  women  who scream to be heard in seas of sorrow  of despair the thoughtless glances that pass over  their shuddered whispers and weak voice  only to form a slow dull, hiss  All the while the ripples are moved by a science and gravity  the moon forces destiny to rocky unforgiving shores  as the tide pulls and pushes in repeated balanced patterns  Driven dreams and churned emotion  forced to collide to correspond to what "should" be  and nothing more.   
 
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Recent Deviations

A Rant: BeliefsThe thing that drives mankind is in not understanding, for if we were to understand God and the forces of humanity, the pace of man kind would halt in its tracks and impale itself upon stopping in its torrent of momentum.  The only thing that keeps us from the truth is ourselves, not God, or any other force but a built in survival mechanism that keeps us smart enough to progress without thought.   
This is the end result of conflicts, in miscommunication and fear we kill, devour, and destroy to give life some sort of meaning that we cannot comprehend.   
Upon understanding we would be without fear, without hate, A Rant: Beliefs
in Philosophical on 10/19/03
IsolationIsolation   
Outside these symbols  Beyond texts mind  Can anyone see this place  where I fear is hidden beyond times grasp  thus beyond all sense of that which bonds us  In ignorance and shackle  and walled confusion  How ready it reads and sees us  as a one way flow through force and fire  Burns our minds short  Slowly as we crawl against it, life blown by and back  Yet our progression never stops to ponder its end  While we grind a new page to different powers  As a stab in spaces infinity I strike, shout  and believe in these earthly endeavors  from which Isolation
in Abstract on 10/10/03
First Collection Third SetCurious Child   
Show me who you are.  Let me see your face, your eyes as the move and dart as small flies do  around a glow of intellectual purity  your wonderful feature.   
 
Fabric   
You only need gaze upon the ocean,  it takes you into its waves  sews your thoughts into its midnight seams;  and draws its essence with yours  to weave a criss-crossed billowed and bubbled pattern  Which encompasses the lives of being beset in its folds.   
 
Oriel   
Flickering window with panes shuttering,  
the light breaking through so strongly, the First Collection Third Set
in Abstract on 10/10/03
First Collection Second SetBroken Again   
Broken again  To be mended once more  Stronger, thicker, tougher  Tightened compacted, warm weathered stone  Rolled across rocky roads without the chocolate  Kicked, thrown with turbulent force  For a moment, airborne, a breeze of wondrous relief  To crash into dust blown into breezes to kiss the cheeks of others.   
 
History   
How can you compound it?  Summarize in a specific language?  Application to intangible star.  Death unto process  Pulled together, then apart by force.  As steel shines in cages so will it keep all  All First Collection Second Set
in Abstract on 10/3/03
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Some months later

Journal Entry: Tue Apr 13, 2004, 10:14 PM
I decided to come back for a bit to see if some of the pieces I posted got any more attention. Its amazing deviantArt allows an account like mine to stick around so long, hehe. Oh well, can't promise any more posts, but who knows? I'll clean things up around here a bit and maybe add some more stuff later.
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Devious Information

  • Current Age: 17
  • Current Residence: North Carolina
  • Interests: Writing
  • Favourite movie: American Beauty, Aliens, Lost in Translation
  • Favourite band or musician: Beck and Radiohead
  • Favourite genre of music: Anything different or Good
  • Favourite poet or writer: Billy Collins
  • Operating System: WinXP
  • MP3 player of choice: WinAmp3
  • Wallpaper of choice: Anything from Deviant's array of Abstract Wallpapers
  • Skin of choice: CoronaXP
  • Favourite game: Halo
  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Favourite cartoon character: Cpt. Murphy of Sealab 2021 "Damnit man they taste like candy!"
  • Personal Quote: "Don't take life seriously, no one gets out alive anyway."
  • Tools of the Trade: Imagination... and maybe dictionary.com's thesaraus

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~tommymalkavian:icontommymalkavian: Nov 20, 2003, 10:17:54 AM
TAG :!:

GOOD MOOD.. Pass it on... :D

:boogie: :hug:

:boogie: away...
~crystalcage:iconcrystalcage: Nov 16, 2003, 11:08:42 AM
HEllo
just leaving some love here!
*tonare:icontonare: Oct 11, 2003, 6:21:54 PM
Thank you for the fav!!!:)

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I believe in Jesus!
Frez™
~tommymalkavian:icontommymalkavian: Oct 4, 2003, 5:13:12 PM
oh feel free to post the rants... some of us enjoy... "odd"... lol..

(if you've read some of my stuff.. you realize that.. lol)

Welcome to DA!!
~FunkyTwoStep:iconFunkyTwoStep: Oct 4, 2003, 1:29:26 PM
how long have you been writing?

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Shoot first. Talk later. :-P
~The30th:iconThe30th: Oct 4, 2003, 10:05:24 AM
^__^ Thanks for your comments guys. I'll be posting the last four soon, and from then on it will probably be individual poems made at that moment or other writings that I can find in the arcive of notepad files (Very unorganized, heh).

Thanks again!

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I need tea itsy bitsy hockey!!
~stickfigure85:iconstickfigure85: Oct 4, 2003, 9:06:15 AM
Thanks for +devwatching me and your comments!!!

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I have nothin to say bla bla bla
~rip318:iconrip318: Oct 3, 2003, 11:04:34 PM
I love your work because it reads like you've lived through the experiences...eh..hope I'm making sense.
Your poems make me think that you're not just blowing hot air- that you yourself put your heart, soul and memory into it.

That's why I appreciate your words. ^_^ *nods*
~3sixty:icon3sixty: Oct 3, 2003, 8:29:51 PM
tnx for your comment! much appreciated!! :heart:
nice to hear from ya! :
cya soon!

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FLEMME Production [link]
~The30th:iconThe30th: Oct 2, 2003, 5:49:35 PM
*Wonders how his work will be judged if people can't even find it*
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